Writing comments about my friend’s essay – only comments not essay
Hi , how are you doing
I need someone to write comments about my friend’s essay
The comment will be about
If he does the following condition that will be alright , and say he has a goo intro but in Academic way . If he has unclear thesis , you will write an advice for him about the thesis , intro con , etc ? Have gotten the idea ?
The conditions are ,
1- Is he has an intro ?
2- Body
3- conclusion
4-vivid detail
5-setting
6-characters
7-climx or conflict
8-solution
9-organization
10- Transition words
11- Smooth
12- Is it MLA format
Pleas I have only 3 hours to submit , so I will let this assignment for 1 hour
Finally, it is comments to improve his writing if he mess something, but if he does it very well , you have to write he has MLA format very well etc and I will attache the essay