Hi , how are you doing
I need someone to write comments about my friend’s essay
The comment will be about
If he does the following condition that will be alright , and say he has a goo intro but in Academic way . If he has unclear thesis , you will write an advice for him about the thesis , intro con , etc ? Have gotten the idea ?
The conditions will be attach as picture and also I will attach his essay. so you can look at his essay and making comments on it
Finally, it is comments to improve his writing if he mess something, but if he does it very well , you have to write he has MLA format very well etc and I will attache the essay
Notice: write the comments as an Essay.